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The Summer of Magic

September 24, 2013
By PollingtonProfessional GOLD, Cadillac, Michigan
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PollingtonProfessional GOLD, Cadillac, Michigan
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"Three may keep a secret, if two of them are dead." -Benjamin Franklin

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Mike and Bow are brothers, who just so happen to be dating one girl, Elizabeth Rucker. How far will they go for love? Far. But once they discover a heartwrenching secret about the past... It will change everything known to man. Get ready to feast your eyes on The Summer of Magic.

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PollingtonProfessional GOLD said...
on Sep. 27 2013 at 2:27 pm
PollingtonProfessional GOLD, Cadillac, Michigan
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&quot;Three may keep a secret, if two of them are dead.&quot; -Benjamin Franklin

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Thank you so much! Im glad you liked it, and I am for sure still working on making it alot better! Still writing chapters while editing old ones. Thanks for your tips, I really appreciate them. :)
AnInkling SILVER said...
on Sep. 26 2013 at 4:04 pm
AnInkling SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
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&ldquo;This is your life. Is it everything you dreamed that it would be, when the world was younger and you had everything to lose?&rdquo; Switchfoot<br /> &ldquo;Have I now become your enemy by telling you the truth?&rdquo; Galatians 4:16

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The story line looks interesting, but it would really improve your writing to keep to one tense. You keep changing from past tense to future or present. Also it would be nice to see sentances start with something else other the subject, and the fight scene in chapter 1 was a little bit-- cartoonish.  However, the plot seems very unique, and it could make an interesting story.