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Air Pollution
July 10, 2011
To feel the cold breeze
And wrap my arms
Around myself
For some warmth
Is what I want to do
But all I feel
Is the smoke
From the vehicles
On the road.
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This article has 12 comments.
beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 14 2012 at 1:37 pm
Yeah! Awesome poem~ It's time we start taking better care of our earth.
Raytheraym PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 11:47 am
Very meaningful! Good job!
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 3:49 am
Yes, I kind of feel guilty too. I hope it gets better... if only people would cooperate.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 12:32 am
the world is so beautiful but so damaged bu it's inhabitants and we're all found guilty beautiful poem
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:18 am
Thanks. I'll try that. :)
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 1:51 am
Thanks but I was actually talking about my wrapping my arms around me for warmth because the breeze makes me cold. ;)
Thanks again and I'm glad you like it. :D
Thanks again and I'm glad you like it. :D
TheHangingGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 10:59 pm
I really liked it. I liked how you said it would wrap around you.
FeedTheBirds SILVER said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 1:53 pm
I feel like this poem could actually be about much more. It has a dark hint to it, like the narrator just witnessed an accident or maybe smoke from his/her burned down house. And you don't necessarily have to change the poem itself to give it more "oomph" but just the title. Like renaming it "T-Boned" or "The sirens are still too far away". I really like the poem, but I just feel it could have more to stand on.