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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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vamppoet16 SILVER said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 12:55 am
You are amazing with words. I know exactly how that feels and i could never have come close. I give it a 10...
Lindda sunshine said...
on Apr. 22 2009 at 5:38 pm
I really really LOVE this poem! it reminds me so much of my very own jerk.. i mean eww.. such a jerk.
Te-Roy-Say BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 7:53 pm
Yes, I like this poem as well!
I can some what relate,
my situation is a bit different though! Haha
But, Yeah Girl, Keep it up!
I can some what relate,
my situation is a bit different though! Haha
But, Yeah Girl, Keep it up!
Rebecca Pitts SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2009 at 1:38 am
Ilove your poem and it hlped me understand a hard time I was going through with a guy at my just like you described in the poem im a poetry writer myslf and a hard critic but all i have to say about this poem INCREDIBLE!!!!!! LUV IT B)
pinksage33 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2009 at 4:20 pm
That is an really GREAT poem!!!
Ciara Murch said...
on Apr. 16 2009 at 8:41 pm
Ya i know someone like that
Lili said...
on Apr. 14 2009 at 10:24 pm
This is a cute honest poem i really LOVE it keep it up
SarahNearol said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 11:01 pm
You have quite a knack for rhyming. Good job. I love rhyming poems, they are my favorite type and this one just captured my attention immediately. You're terrific!
sasuke468 said...
on Apr. 11 2009 at 7:44 pm
i can totally relate love it
i looooooove it! i can totally relate! its amazing! can you please tell me what you think of my work too??
its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped
thanks! and again urs was a relllly good poem!! seriously!
its TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91361/Trapped
thanks! and again urs was a relllly good poem!! seriously!
candy said...
on Apr. 8 2009 at 5:39 pm
very good poem so great!!!!!! and awesome so cool
DoLL_F@C3 said...
on Apr. 7 2009 at 11:34 pm
this is great
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