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isnt that low?
September 29, 2010
What is wrong with me?
I want to ask
To question to their face…
What would they say?
I burn to know the answer
But dread to feel the ache
What have I done wrong to you?
What I have gotten myself into?
You feel something you call hate…
But wait.
How can you hate someone you don’t know
To me that kind of just seems…low.
© Jennifer H., Bethesda, MD
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IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 16 2011 at 9:35 pm
The last line is so... right, I guess :)
Such a great poem, and so many people relate to it. That is quite the accomplishment, kmarie.
PrincessPea PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2010 at 9:42 pm
tis peice reallly wants me want to know what ppl no now. how do you judge ppl by the way tey look how you hate someone you dont knw????????????if only they would understand...love it
THANK YOU! you have no idea how much it means to me that you would take time to read and comment on all my stuff! I will stay updated with all of yours ;) and ya...I wrote this because well alot of people said they dont like me, or even hated me...and i didnt even know them at all
Hummingbird GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2010 at 3:55 pm
I wish more people would have the chance to read this beautiful poem because it is so true. You are so right, because how can you hate someone if you don't know them? So true, and so many people could benefit from this poem- and I wished that more people actually lived their life this way- Not passing harmful judgements. Nice Job!
mwahxandxmwa SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 11:49 pm
You are very talented and also very intracate writer, you don't just plainly state your feelings you ask people to venture into there own minds it is very beautiful and extremely clever! mwah :D
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 11:48 pm
NO PROBLEM! AND THANKS! WHENSOMEONE IS THAT GOOD ITS WORTH UR TIME TO READ IT ALL
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE said...
on Oct. 16 2010 at 3:12 pm
SHORT AND SWEET AND BEAUTIFUL GREAT EMOTION TOO
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 6:35 pm
I wouldn't say it if it wasn't true:)
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 10 2010 at 4:04 pm
No problem:) If I had room I'd favorite this.
OfficialApprover PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 9 2010 at 9:42 pm
This was beautiful. I love the questions, they really fit the mood, and it've very relatable. Great rhythm and flow, nice and smooth. Great job:)
Thank you so much! (: I know, and sometimes I guess i am a hypocrit because i dont always give people of good chance before i get to know them, but i really do try my best...I think that really if we all just took the time to get to know eachother nobody could really hate
AlyssaNeal said...
on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:41 am
I love how truthful this poem is, everyone now-a-day's is so judgemental, and dont like you, for you. If people just stopped, and listened, and talked to you, they would realize how great you are. Great Poem, I love your writing!