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Very Scary
January 19, 2012
This one guy told me that he was, going to kill him self if he got called gay again that's very scary
One of the only friends I have is going to leave school cause I'm her only friend that's very scary
I know this guy that spends four-hundred dollars on drugs every week that very scary
I work so much and beat myself up with these math problems to the point I speak of word problem in my sleep that's very scary
This one girl I know told me we were going to get married (Oh my) that's very very scary
Teachers aren't wasting there time with hopeless students that's very scary
© Eric H., Lafayette, IN
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Its.beautiful. BRONZE said...
on Sep. 14 2012 at 1:05 pm
Couldn't make it past the first line in the first stanza. Congrats!!! You've failed again!
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2012 at 7:15 pm
Haha, that be nice...
-Thank you
Sure, I will - was pllanning on it. Except for that, if you want help with the proofreading submit your stuff to the writers' forum first - I get an email when you do something on the site (ooh, stlalker..!) so I'll know. I can comment and correct it if you'd like...I'd love to, personally/
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 7:22 pm
Thank you, I just type this up when I got the account. Yeah, I do need to proofread a little more. I think if you read my more recent stuff you'd be pleased.
Loved this! Again (I just commented on "Do as you speak"), this is totally unique and original. Same problem though, the polishing: here that means grammar (their\there), proofreading and just basically polishing. Just a tip! Except (and despite) that, though, loved this and am favoriting it.
DOODOO said...
on Feb. 21 2012 at 7:04 am
This is great!
SallySunshine said...
on Feb. 16 2012 at 6:21 pm
Ohhhhh my lord!!!!!! Your writing is soooo freaking good :) haha btw its Alicia :))))) Anyways... yeah i had no idea you were that good of a writer! im gonna put 5 stars on all of your work :] goood job.. keep it up:))
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 5:45 pm
Well thank you very much!
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 12:20 pm
Thank you, I really do not like this piece....
JoyFulClown BRONZE said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 10:23 pm
This is Very good for a first piece, But you cut it off a lot with just ending every sentence with "that's very scary" I say it is good just try to put more into it(: Keep up the good work.
BraxtonLangstonChapman SILVER said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 5:34 pm
Thanks read some of my other things
penningtonridesbikes said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 11:13 am
Awesome writing...keep it up!