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Looking Glass
November 3, 2012
They stare me down, eternally,
those clear, innocent blue eyes
like a looking glass.
Such a lie those eyes have told;
pain infliction, words
that meant more
than he may ever realize,
nevertheless care about.
Those eyes, such lies,
penetrate my very soul.
Never revealing any signs
of my torture.
© Lauren S., Reading, Berkshire, UK
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This article has 6 comments.
theloverofbooks SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 6:15 pm
Why thank you! :D
colorguardgrl ELITE said...
on Nov. 8 2012 at 9:28 am
Amazing. Words fail me. Just amazing.
theloverofbooks SILVER said...
on Nov. 7 2012 at 7:07 pm
Thank you so much! :3 This is basically a first draft, I found it half-finished in my journal from two years ago, and I just recently changed the beginning and completed the poem. I appreciate the feedback! :D
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 7 2012 at 6:11 pm
Wow, great job. This is really a well-written poem. I love your use of similes, and overall AMAZING job! 5 stars!
TaylorWintry DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 7 2012 at 5:50 pm
WOW. Just wow. That poem is amazing! You did an amazing job writing this. Tell me, is this a first draft? If so, I applaud you!!!
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