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Jerk MAG
January 2, 2009
I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.
I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,
you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.
I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill
the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.
© Colton D., Lubbock, TX
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bmmswm said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 10:35 am
why is your poem have lots of love?
bmmskh said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 10:34 am
that is so sweet and true
BMMSTM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:00 am
very true great writing style too! i loved it, i can really tell how you felt when you wrote this!
BMMSSM said...
on Mar. 1 2010 at 9:00 am
aw how sweet! it reely says somthin!
artfromtheheart BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 10:37 pm
Can you read mine? The link is http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/180406/Everybit-Makes-A-Difference/
Btw, amazingg job! luv it
Btw, amazingg job! luv it
kmpoetgirl7 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 10:25 pm
wow, it's like i can feel the emotion being poured out onto the page! That's amazing! Great job.
booksareemysanctuary BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 5:13 pm
great writing. keep up the good work! :)
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 5:09 pm
i luvv this! so deep & i luv the emotionz u put into it. plz keep writing
BayleyButton said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 4:02 pm
So true. [: This is really good! My favorite so far on this website. But the again I haven't read much here. [:
slrocker777 said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:11 pm
Great poem, I could really sense the feeling you were giving off in it.
victoria96 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 12:02 pm
i love this it is soo true sometimes good work :)
This poem is okay, I liked the precious jerk line, that was very different and unique. I think I'd be able to relate to it better if I had a precious jerk!! But the writing was very well done and I really liked this poem! Check out mine too!! Good luck and keep writing!
alwayswriting14 SILVER said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 9:32 am
You captured my own feelings in poetry- it's all right there. Man, am i stupid.
fuzzybootsrawr BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 5:47 pm
i hate jerks even if they are beautiful i like em nerdy and sweet
guzpacho said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 8:02 am
having a stupid jerk of my own abuses meh mentaly and just a few days ago i let hem go, and so for my own personal stupid jerk good ridence!!
besticanbe SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 3:20 pm
creative and funny. good job
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