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Jerk MAG

January 2, 2009
By Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
Christina BRONZE, Clifton, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 26 comments

I love your voice,
your soft brown hair.
I love your eyes
and love your stare.

I love your laugh,
your cocky smirk,
your stupid jokes.
You precious jerk,

you know I do.
I want my hands
all through your hair
each treasured strand.

I’m wrapped around
your finger still.
Am I yet yours?
Your love does kill

the things I hold
so close to me
and yet you’re the
best jerk I see.



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Jessica said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 7:54 pm
this poem perfectly describes my situation. a guy i know is just like girl describes it in the poem. I know hes a jerk but i still fall for him. i may think im strong but with him im weak. and for that he is a jerk...

Sherky said...
on Jan. 25 2010 at 9:06 pm
You are great Frances keep on the good writting dont ever give up like i did

on Jan. 25 2010 at 1:46 pm
♫Musicloving♫ BRONZE, Atlanta, Georgia
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
ha ha funny i don't know either

on Jan. 24 2010 at 9:35 pm
aStrelly SILVER, Moses Lake, Washington
6 articles 9 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Dignity does not consist in possessing honours, but in deserving them.&quot; -Aristotle<br /> &quot;No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.&quot;-Eleanor Roosevelt

Love this. (: very good!

on Jan. 24 2010 at 2:23 pm
EzriaRose SILVER, San Leandro, California
7 articles 0 photos 6 comments
this made me smile. makes me think of a few people ive known *rolls eyes* its very honest and short and sweet. i like it. keep it up!

on Jan. 24 2010 at 1:39 pm
kimmycakes GOLD, Monrovia, California
14 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;never let love bring u down&quot; also &quot;and so the lion fell in love with the lamb&quot;

wow this is really good i agree with u!!! and i feel the same way about my precious jerk lol

on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:04 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow<br /> By Me:)

this made me laugh i love it:)

lover hater said...
on Jan. 21 2010 at 5:16 pm
omg this is hot

so cool

its sick

on Jan. 21 2010 at 8:32 am
ThunderLovestheRain SILVER, Brookhaven, Mississippi
9 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t fret when it rains on your parade...just learn to dance in it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Be yourself...everyone else is already taken.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Speak your mind, even if your voice shakes.&quot;

Wow...i love how it made me smile when I read it! :p good job!

ZiRaww! SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 7:15 pm
ZiRaww! SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
5 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Giving up doesn&rsquo;t always mean you are weak; sometimes it means that you are strong enough to let go. &rdquo;

I'm pretty sure I wont

tara said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:11 pm
so true, let me know when you find the answer.

on Jan. 20 2010 at 12:02 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Reality is almost always wrong.&quot;-House<br /> <br /> &quot;Don&#039;t worry when you feel something, worry when you don&#039;t.&quot;- SVU

This such an adorable poem! i can relate too! it reminds me of my boyfriend sometimes. i love him though! forever and always. lol. anyways, keep it up. you're amazing at it. XD

on Jan. 19 2010 at 9:27 am
PoetryinMotion329 BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
2 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
(This is my own quote) &quot; Poetry is a portal into ones mind. An escape from reality. And in this escape we find bliss and understanding...We find ourselves&quot;...

this just might be the most bluntfully true and real poem ive seen in awhile. love the way u captured the emotion. i feel the same about my "precious jerk" lol> great job...

on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:23 pm
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
35 articles 29 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch&mdash; and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

soooo good (:

truelove GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 7:11 pm
truelove GOLD, Mansfield, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 5 comments
I loved it. you did a great job. keep going.

on Jan. 17 2010 at 7:45 pm
LuLu95 PLATINUM, Denver, Colorado
32 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Oooh! Dark matter, we better bring a flashlight!&quot;

this is so amazing :) i love it

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:13 pm
kelseaanne BRONZE, Shingle Springs, California
1 article 1 photo 1 comment
great. very relatable, i can bet just about every girl out there has been there dont that. (serveral times too)

good work(:

on Jan. 17 2010 at 6:01 pm
innocence BRONZE, San Jose, California
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;heres a lie i wish were true; i really really hate you too&quot;

too cute =)

kenna2013 GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 7:43 pm
kenna2013 GOLD, Corinth, Kentucky
12 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;love begins with a smile,grows with a kiss,and ends with a teardrop.&quot;

I love this it reminds me so much of the guy that i like right now so im sure a bunch of people can relate to this

Pillow BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 6:47 pm
Pillow BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
1 article 5 photos 300 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing says oops like a wall of flame.

I like this one. The picture is purfect for it too. I know so many guys like that. You can't with em but can't live without em.

5 stars.